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He was not worth a penny for her.She turned him down.

Today was her first job in the library.She was struck by a photo,its resemblance.When enquired ,she knew he was a landlord ,once owned this place on which the library stood.Bad fortune led his family penniless.

Somehow,she felt the person on the photo was smiling at her.

from mylittleworld

10 comments:

  1. Portraits speak to us...


    Here is mine:
    homing

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  2. Hmm...interesting and quite deep once you get it but somehow (maybe because of the word limit) the story is confusing.
    Also, 'he was not worth a penny for her' could probably be better as without the 'for her' and makes more sense. (If I interpreted it right).

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  3. @gautami -Thank you :)
    @Sakhi - hmm...I tried that too...but its still more confusing as to what he is related too..so I went with that "to her"...

    As you say "there is a word limit" but its simple as that like it's an "excerpt" from a story...she is money-minded and because of that she turned him down but when she landed on a job in a library ,she came to know that his great-grandfather was a rich person and due to some reasons his generation landed in poverty.Somehow she felt guilty when things get related to one another.....

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  4. nice..and perhaps too she made the right decision...but then there is that smile.

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  5. I like the cryptic, upbeat ending. Seems hopeful.

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  6. hahaha.. she did the right thing apparently.. clever take!

    Memento

    Weekend Hugs xx

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  7. Nawwww...
    He was smiling WITH her!!!
    I just love smirky 55's
    Thank You so much for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  8. It just goes to show people are always more than they seem.

    - Alice

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  9. That is a sly little smile captured there. The male Mona Lisa. Great 55.

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  10. Interesting, offbeat, striking work.

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