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Tiny droplets of water on the glass window sill calling my imaginations and thoughts to be typed and blogged.I inserted the image and now I stare at it for a long time .....

Credits: Eric
She was sitting inside her room near her widow.There was no current in the house because she was in India where the current goes off when it rains heavily .Instead ,the room was lit with dim candle light.An half-emptied bottle of water lay beside the table .She went to reach it out when she saw a bank paper laying on the table requesting her glance.She at once agreed and scribbled a few words listening to the whispers and the noises that broke the silence on this dark night .

rain
drizzle
mist
precipitation
sprinkle
wet
pour
dew
downpour
drop
trickle
splash
liquid
shower
spray

All the words were related to the happenings now.It's the water , its metamorphism , its transformation or say its forms....you name it your way .With a sigh , she opened the window .She could feel the rush of cool breeze in her room filling her body and her mind with some moist relaxation.She took a quick breath and noticed the tiny droplets hanging down the window sill waiting its turn to fall down.She slowly touched the droplets of water hanging on the iron rod that ran over her window.The soft water balls reflected her hands as she moved in front of it and it's surface , it spread itself on her hand.She loved the play.Again, she bend down to see the other droplets clearly.They reflected her face and her eyes.A curve called smile slowly appeared on her face.She moved back and sat on her chair looking at the droplets feeling the cold air filling her and her room.She took her pen from the pen stand and played with those written words from her paper.She collected how her five senses of seeing, hearing g,tasting,feeling, smelling had the role of water in each and every pace of her life .

After fifteen minutes, satisfied with her work she drank the water and emptied the bottle. A sense of satisfaction passed all over her body....W.A.T.E.R .

The two extremes of feelings
drizzle on every human life

as dew 
tear drops trickles near eyes
on an unexpected outcome 
precipitated feelings 
balancing my right weight 

as downpour 
Grief rains , showers my face
wet eyes and soul
pouring out the heaviness 
of the mind and heart
balancing my left ,as I ride

on this journey of bumpy roads
splashing through emotions 
spraying precious liquid 
dripping from the eyes
whispering
silent untold words
straight from the Heart


The above image is a prompt given by blog-o-tonic to pen down my thoughts .I finished and saved my draft to be posted on May 7th.My tongue aches and now I move to my kitchen for that five letter precious word that fills my five senses with satisfaction - WATER.

11 comments:

  1. @UmaAnandane
    Love ur post n the way u have reflected upon the water in motion!!

    Very Interesting!

    Bwt. plz check BAT page again...I think your link is not properly published!

    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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  2. @rachana ..:) thanks for your handprint :)..I checked the link and it's working fine ,thanks for informing me though :D

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  3. Nice one. Beautiful thoughts. I have visited your Inside my Poem Book often (though always somwehow miss out commenting) You write amazing poetry and so much informative material on poetry forms. My first time here though. You have nicely woven poetry into light prose here.

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  4. I love all the pondering about water and its meaning(s). Great picture from Eric too. :)

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  5. Aww..
    W.A.T.E.R
    -
    Wanted
    And
    The
    Expected
    Ridicule

    Awesome poetry Uma.. Pleasure to have you in Blog-a-Ton.. The more real it is the more lovable it is..

    I so love your awesome poem and Glad you penned this awesome post.. Thanks for this Uma...

    Good luck for BAT....and ~ the pic became our.. the home became our... ~

    Someone is Special

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  6. Funny no? a single element can have such a deep meaning...nice depicted.

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  7. Prose and poetry together to make a wonderful reading! I loved it! :) Good thoughts to think upon for the reader as well.

    My Blogaton Entry

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  8. @Karthik -Thanks for such lovely comment.You are always welcomed to both my blogs:)

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  9. @ Rachel - Hmm.. thanks for dropping by and leaving your sweet comment

    @sis- yes,I think this is my first time in BAT and hope to be seen more..thanks for inviting :D

    @sid- funny?its real man ...you can see its presence everywhere even inside our own body ..impressive na :)

    @leo -Glad you enjoyed my writings here too :D

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  10. How very inventive, Uma! Pure delight. A top entry in Blog-a-Ton. Well done, dear poet. Extremely well done.

    Write on ...

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  11. Hydrogen and oxygen will definitely love you . . . Innovative and quite expressive :-)

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